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October 4, 2005
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That is so creepily AWESOME!
It makes you wonder if Ginny knows any Dark Magic now...if she, like Harry, has had some of Riddle's powers transferred to her. Might come in handy!
For advanced critique, I think that Tom is a little short. Considering that he is 16 and Ginny is 11, and that Tom Riddle is tall in the first place...
But other than that, really good!
Maybe you should have Tom Riddle being a little more spectral, a touch see-through...
Fave.
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When Toph punches Aang, it's called chemistry; when Mai teases Zuko, it's called insensitivity.
I did consider making Tom translucent and greenish or something, but frankly I don't think I could have pulled it off convincingly at all and I had the opacity messed up so much it freaked out and turned black everytime it touched it. (whoops!) I don't know, I may come back to it. And after looking at it, I think you're right about his hight. I'll mess around with it and see what I come up with.
Again, thanks for the critique!
But if GINNY was slightly transparent...
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"Put an apple on your head, and we'll find out how good I am!"
When Toph punches Aang, it's called chemistry; when Mai teases Zuko, it's called insensitivity.
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